Peer Comments

Cinematography

• Lots of different camera angles and shots keep it interesting
• Camera can be seen in glasses at start

Editing

• Matched up lip synching well but need more (this is not our fault as we didn't get much)
• Good effects- some don't really fit though

Mise-en-scene

• Good costumes (hats, glasses etc), goes with genre
• Good locations, could have more though
• Josh B needs a shave
  

Genre Conventions

• No narrative, bit random
• Some shots not relevant to lyrics, no car either

What's Missing?

• More lip synching
• More thoughts that link to lyrics
• Rest of video (not our fault as there was no tape in the camera when we went to film at CVC)