Tanya feedback

1. Some shots are quite long e.g. initial shots are of Josh. Well framed but needs more close ups of performers. Some shots rather daft.

2. Appropriate use of cuts back and forth to different locations. You could cut through the lines.

3. Mise-en-scene of urban environment fits well. Could do with more graffiti etc.

4. Costume and props all appropriate to the genre, as is the setting.

5. More close ups of performance. More graffitit (or other) more abstract images to use in edit.